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Continued from Them - Part 3

He stood there dumb-founded, the words not really registering upon him. She was leaving and he stood rooted to the spot. His mind was filled with a thousand questions all of which wanted an answer at once. His mind was filled with an impenetrable mist. He was lost in the fog. He was searching desperately for some kind of an answer. And by the time the mists cleared, she was gone. He stood there, looking at the ring in his hand.

***

She strode up rapidly toward the exit, dabbing her kerchief at her eyes attempting to remove the last traces of tears. But the harder she tried, the faster they came and then they didn’t stop.

His denial had been his undoing. The fact that he so vehemently denied proved that there was indeed someone else in his life. And he had been shocked when she first threw the accusation at him, hadn’t he? If he was telling the truth he needn’t have looked so shocked, right?

Oh why? Why me? Why does it have to be me? Didn’t I love him enough? Why did he have to go to someone else? What did the bitch have that she didn’t? She was definitely a hundred, thousand times more beautiful than her. Even he had said so. And even he admitted that she had a more beautiful smile than the bitch. She also had a better figure than her. Then why?

The strains of a latest movie song filled the air. She faintly recognized it as her cell phone ring-tone. She wiped her tears as best as she could, cleaned her nose and answered the phone. It was Sam.

“Hey, sorry I couldn’t call earlier. I was a little stuck in a meeting here. What’s wrong with your mobile?”

“Nothing. Why?”

“He was trying the whole of evening, but it seemed your mobile was ‘out of coverage area.’ Even I keep getting the same response. Where have you been?”

“Nowhere in particular. Why, what happened?”

“What happened? Haven’t you heard? He’s been promoted to Project Manager!! He wanted you to have the news first. But your cell phone must have conked off. So he called me. They forced him to host a small party and he said he would be late. So he asked me to call you and inform. I was stuck in a meeting with my boss so I couldn’t call earlier. You there?”

“Uh? Yes…”

“He’s slogged mighty hard for it, you know. The boss was impressed. Now he can easily book that flat he’s been looking at the whole of last month.”

“Flat? What flat?”

“You mean he hasn’t told you yet? Uh oh, big mistake! I was supposed to keep it a secret until he told it to you. Damn, me and my big mouth!! Listen, don’t tell him I told you. He’ll kill me. Come to think of it, he should have been there by now. Hasn’t he come yet? Hello… hello…”

She heard nothing more. Clutching the phone in her hand she ran. She knew he wouldn’t be there. Nobody would stomach such an insult and stay. But in her heart she hoped he would stay. She already knew what she had to do.

She reached the park bench. He was nowhere to be seen. Her heart sank. And then she noticed a lone figure sitting on the grass. It was he. He was sitting desolately, plucking the petals off the bunch of roses. She walked up to him. He saw her and immediately stood up, the joy on his face evident, but masked by caution.

She bade him sit on the grass. He obeyed.

He was still clutching the ring. She took his hand in hers and slipped on the ring. He looked at her and smiled. Everything was forgiven. The moment of madness had passed, faded. She leant upon his shoulder and rested her head upon it. He moved his fingers through her long hair. She attempted to speak.

“I…”

“Shhh… Don’t say a word. The new girl at the office is on the phone. I thought since you had left, I might as well flirt a little…”

Well, life was full of surprises.

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Author’s note:
That’s all that I have for the moment. I intend to continue it later, from this point, but don’t see where to go… Maybe I need one of those flashes-of-inspiration things that people keep talking about… :)

8 Responses to “Them - Part 4”
  1. maitrai says:

    do do continue… idhar hi chodega toh thoda typical (tho nice) walla love story ho jaayega.

    somehow, i’ve taken a liking 4 bitter-sweet endings then the regular ones. more fun. :)
    toodles.

  2. ira says:

    That’s good Shrikant.. hey u were plannin’ to make every one cry!!! but ur story took a sweet turn!! Hey don’t leave it here!!.. it shld surely have some twist… ;)
    I’m sure u can do it!!!.. com’on… continue the story..
    put some spice …. haldii mirchi in it…. :P
    waiting for the next part.. i’m sure u’ll get the inspiration to write the next part soon!!

    all the best for the next part.. I’m sure ur brain will cook up something soon!!!

    Cheers!
    :)

  3. sthupit girl says:

    So I got my happy ending after all- you ARE a fast learner.

    *please oh please dont let that provoke you into doing a sad ending*

    All my love,
    SG.

  4. Shrikant Joshi says:

    @ladies:
    Thank you… :)
    @GS:
    Dudette, you started taking cases already?

    @Ira:
    This brain is busy cooking something all right, but something really different…. ;)
    @SG:
    You can’t provoke me like that… :P
    Cheers!

  5. ira says:

    yaa something different, would be excillent :) … waiting for ur next post..
    I guess u have been too busy lately…working and all.. hmmm….
    write something that’ll make all ur readers happy…
    all the best
    cheers!!

  6. maitrai says:

    cases? what cases? i’m the bestest of cases - that is, after paying due respects to the great nutcase……!
    me was, btw, talking abt fiction. unless ofcourse, that was facts. in which case…….. Was The Dude U?????? :P

  7. Shrikant Joshi says:

    @Ira:
    Readers? Whoa, dudette!! Only a few regulars like you visit this site, nobody else… As for the story, well patience, dudette, patience.

    @GS:
    Which nutcase? Be specific…
    I was talking about fiction as well, but the words you chose were strange.

    And no, the dude in the story definitely isn’t me! I am single and happy! And I intend to remain like that for a long time to come, thank you very much. :P
    Cheers!

  8. ira says:

    hey Shrikant… don’t u worry.. i’m sure one day.. lots will visit ur site.. tab tak hum jaissoonn see kaam challaa lee!!! [;)]
    yaa i’m waiting patiently.. for ur next part.. hahaa
    I knwo u r busy in Ahemdabad!!
    Cheers!!

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